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8 Secrets To Writing Killer Post Titles

12/04/2009 - 1:00 am By Diana Adams

One of the first things I figured out when I became a blogger is that the title to your post can make or break you. I read several blogs each day, and some of the best posts I’ve ever read have not had many views, and it’s because the title sucked.

When I’m in a hurry and don’t put a lot of thought into my article titles, it shows in the views. When I take my time to write something better, it shows in the views. If you are using Twitter to spread the word about your blog, this detail is even more critical since your readers are bombarded with a fresh stream of tweets constantly.

I learned from http://www.copyblogger.com/ that the 80/20 rule also applies to your post title. On average, 8 out of 10 people will read a headline, but only 2 out of 10 will go on to read the content. If we want our posts to be noticed, now is the time to up our game!

So, how do you write a title to your post that will grab
your reader in a choke hold and not let go?

Below are some tips that have helped me. If you have some tips that have worked for you, please leave them in a comment below so we can all learn together!

Keep it short
Keeping your title short is so important! If you have to, write it, and then slice it in half, just like you do your post. You definitely want to leave room for a retweet or two on Twitter, so try to keep it to 120 characters at most, preferably shorter. No need to be clever and intellectual. Just keep it simple.

Do not ask a yes or no question in the title
Question titles are fine, just as long as they aren’t yes or no questions. If you use a yes or no question, people will answer the question, but not click on your link and read your content. I learned this the hard way with the post: “Is Auto-Tweet a Dirty Word?” So many people sent me tweets answering the question by saying yes or no, but the article only has a little over 2,000 views. It would have had a lot more views with a different title.

List titles work great
People love lists. They like to know the “top 10 reasons” or the “5 ways to do..” It lets them know right up front what to expect in the article and the length. You’ll also attract all those detail oriented statistic maniacs out there that love to read lists. (opps, did I just say that?)

Use a current event in your title
My twitter friend, @BuzzEdition, is a master of this technique. When a topic is hot, you have a very limited amount of time to get your content out there, but if the timing is right, and you incorporate it into your title, you’ll be golden!

Be very specific
Be as specific as you can in as few words as you can. Here is an example of the difference:
Ways You Can Look Thinner
5 Easy Tips to Look Thinner Tonight
See the difference?

Don’t be misleading in your title
How many times have we all seen a great title and clicked on the link only to be disappointed when the content does not live up to the title? Sometimes, when trying to come up with a good title, we can accidentally be misleading. Be wary of that. Think long term. You want those visitors to return to your site, and in order to build rapport, the title and the content must match.

Use power adjectives
There is a certain magic in words, and although it might take a little time to tap into it, once you do, you will have the world at your fingertips. I found a handy little list of power adjectives thanks to http://ezinearticles.com. I use http://thesaurus.reference.com almost every day to find some of these delicious adjectives.

Adjectives vs. Power Adjectives
* Appealing – attractive, alluring, fascinating
* Best – excellent, unsurpassed, paramount
* Cool – trendy, fashionable, hip
* Different – unusual, exclusive, special
* Easy – effortless, trouble-free, user-friendly
* Fabulous – tremendous, magnificent, remarkable
* Handy – functional, ideal, well-suited
* Improved – enhanced, superior, refined
* Leading – first-rate, top-notch, supreme
* Mouthwatering – tasty, savory, succulent
* New – innovative, fresh, inventive
* Powerful – forceful, persuasive, compelling
* Reliable – dependable, steadfast, trustworthy
* Safe – secure, fully guarded, guaranteed
* Unique – distinctive, rare, matchless
* Vivid – vibrant, brilliant, stunning
* Wonderful – magnificent, amazing, astonishing

Use emotional (right brained) words instead of rational (left brained words)
Here are some examples of the contrast between right brained and left brained words. See if you can feel the difference.

Left Brain Words vs. Right Brain Words
* Beneficial – Good For
* Demise – Death
* Gratification – Enjoyment
* Immediately – Right Now
* Fortunate – Lucky
* Learn – Find Out
* Superior – Better
* Intelligent – Bright
* Observed – Seen
* Sufficient – Enough

Did you know that The Huffington Post uses real-time testing to write better titles/headlines? You can view this article HERE.

I hope these tips help you as much as they’ve helped me. Good luck writing your next post title!

I would like to give photo credit for the colorful magic marker image above to http://www.flickr.com/photos/don3rdse.

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Author: Diana Adams

By day, Diana is the CEO/owner of Adams Consulting Group, Inc, a technology services and business solutions consultancy firm serving the specific needs of its clients in advertising and public relations. By night, she lives and breathes by writing. After publishing a small cookbook last year, she is now working on her new masterpiece, scheduled for publishing next year. “I could write all night long and not get tired of it. I think that is when you know you’ve tapped into a true passion. Whatever that thing may be, if you could do it all day or night long, lose track of time, ‘wake up’ ten hours later, and still thirst for more, that is a passion, and I feel like I’ve found that in my writing.” Diana also spends many hours each week assisting the homeless men and women in Atlanta. You can find her on Twitter at @adamsconsulting.


55 Comments

anita white

December 4th, 2009

I just finished your fresh and compelling article! It helped point out the use of descriptive words shortened into compelling sentences that will immediately draw a readers interest. It was well written and I’m going to practice tonight trying some of these sentences.When I speak on twitter-i feel the thud of my words not being as powerful as I meant them to be so it is fun to have ideas to spark the imagination toward more dynamic writing! Your generous sharring is greatly appreciated!

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Einar Rice

December 4th, 2009

Hi Diana! Thank you once again for a great article!! I have sent this on to all of our editorial staff. I sure they to will reap the benefits from your excellent guide.

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Diana Adams

December 4th, 2009

Thank you both for your kind words! This is one of my favorite topics, and I’m so happy you enjoyed this article.

Thank you for taking the time to visit our blog.

Best Wishes,
Diana

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web2000

December 4th, 2009

Thank you! These article title tips will come in handy to me in the future.

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Misty Belardo

December 4th, 2009

WOW! This is truly helpful for me.. You are so right, putting so much effort on the article is a must but making sure you have a great title is halfway to winning the attention of readers.

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Kimba Green

December 4th, 2009

Thank you! I needed that reminder. Especially the right brain left brain. When you are coming from the left it is hard to remember you are writing for the rights too!

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Benson Mensah-Bonsu

December 4th, 2009

This is truly a great article. I believe that outlining your blog with killer titles helps to focus the message the writer is trying to communicate.

The Power Adjectives and Right Brain Words can take your writing to the next level. I would also consider using vivid verbs within the body.

Thanks Diana

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Cat Johnson

December 4th, 2009

Thanks for the tips and reminders. I especially appreciate the power adjectives.

Words are funny creatures; they can bring the people running or just sit there in isolation, depending on which one’s you’ve chosen to use.

Cheers.

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Daniel Barta

December 4th, 2009

Diana,

Your articles are awesome.
They are very useful and interesting + they are also great to improve my English.

Congratulations.

This article is also very useful. Thank you for writing.
Bit Rebels is richer with you.

Good job.

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Diana Adams Reply:

Daniel,

It’s people like you that inspire me to keep writing. Your comments are always kind. I am thankful to you that you keep coming back and reading our blog.

Best wishes to you always,
Diana

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Joyce Cherrier

December 4th, 2009

I was just having a brain freeze over a title! Great info and truly helpful! Another winning post Diana!

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Shelly Kramer

December 5th, 2009

Fab article, D. Have bookmarked for future reference – always the sign of something magnificent.

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Diana Adams Reply:

Whoah! I got bookmarked? You made my day. LOL That is HUGE! w00t! Thank you soooo much. Haha!

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Victoria Finch

December 5th, 2009

Great article. Thanks for the tips.

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ghostwriter

December 5th, 2009

Power adjectives are better than regular adjectives, but strong nouns are even better:

Guess which celebrities eat like a pig
Guess which celebrities are messy eaters

12 tips for superior blogging
12 tips to blog like a champion

Etc.

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Diana Adams Reply:

Ohhh…. that’s good. That’s really, really good. Love it!!

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@MadKeet

December 5th, 2009

Has social media cured you of all your marketeer skills ie: Headlines, emotive words. Or are they just catching up ? A good book is ‘Magic words’ – Napolean Hill

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December 9th, 2009

Very interesting tips, thanks ;-)

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Murlu

December 10th, 2009

Very helpful that you listed the left and right brain words instead of what many people do and just say “use passionate words”.

These are some great tips :)

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Blogger Den

December 10th, 2009

Titles are partially the most important part of blog posts, as they are what the reader sees before even looking at the content. Very interesting article and aspect of looking at things!

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Allison Rizk

December 20th, 2009

Diana, this is just the article that I needed! I always struggle with writing a compelling title for my music blog and this breaks it down into very easy and helpful pieces. Thanks, girl!

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Chethan

December 23rd, 2009

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February 1st, 2010

Bookmarked! Some userful points there thank you.

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February 1st, 2010

Bookmarked! Some userful points there thank you.

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February 6th, 2010

This is really useful. Thanks for giving specific lists rather than generalities.

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Nigel Fenwick

February 6th, 2010

Another great post Diana – thank you! (Bookmarked this one).

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February 6th, 2010

Awesome! Informative as usual. I love reading your stuff, I wish I was as talented as you are.

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Thomas Craig Consulting

March 8th, 2010

Nice post Diana, thanks for the tips, will put your suggestions to the test on some upcoming posts.

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Theraisa K

March 11th, 2010

These tips make total sense. Sometimes the simple things are the ones I most overlook! I will definitely have to stop and think more about what I write to generate not only better content, but better titles to go along with it! Thanks for the advice!

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March 11th, 2010

Just printed out the whole list and sticked it to my wall hehe thank you Queen D

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Loren Fogelman

May 1st, 2010

Interesting information about right brain/left brain words. Can’t wait to try that out with this weeks articles.

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May 8th, 2010

Best in your upcoming book, and thanks for the specific info.

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May 22nd, 2010

Great tips!! These will come in handy when I writing my blogs!!

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June 11th, 2010

i love your posts, always interesting. I’m a nightmare when it comes to writing, especially on twitter. I’m going to post these on my wall too.
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Joey

September 2nd, 2010

This post has a ton of value. It really resonated with all the title experimenting I’ve been doing lately.
I wrote this post about titles recently, it’s a bit more focused, but I’m really excited about it.

http://www.galaxyninja.com/uncategorized/titles-that-wont-let-you-down-the-2-simple-secrets-to-powerful-titles/

I’d love any feedback and comments.

Keep rockin,

Joey

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